Cold Moon on Crystal Mountain.
Cold moon on Crystal Mountainstiff bamboo is frozen in iceunfamiliar stars drift down from the skies- the snow bees of the voidcome to gather thoughtsfrom minds at the edge of sleep.Strive as I might...
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Willow,So beautifully written in your inimitable style.I felt the frigid air, yet gloried at the heat ofcomets passing through the sky."Cold moon on Crystal Mountainmeteors seem to fall foreverin...
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thanks sarah - I was thinking of those lovely Japanese paintings of snowy, moonlit mountains...
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As a child, our family photo album had a cloissonne cover of Mt. Fuji. It was so smooth and cold to the touch. Your poem did indeed remind me of it.
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Good!As a teenager I enjoyed Basho's "Narrow Road to the Deep North" and the poems of Li Po, Tu Fu and Wang Wei (?)
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I agree with Brian, you took the reader to the mountain and gave us the wherwithal to observe, with you, its glacial beauty . . .
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thanks very much Brian Paul, fauxcajun and Karen - your words much appreciated.
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